First result from MetaBalls C4D

http://i54.tinypic.com/2q8a8fp.png
Im a noob, so be nice :)
Any suggestions greatly appreciated :)

looking great bro :)

Looks good, I'm not a huge fan of the 'pipe' however.

Looking good but that thing in the back kinda ruins it.

i dont like the thing you got going across the piece. Pipe or something like gallagher said? Remove it imo. Also reflections looks way too plastic. Mess with your specular and reflections a lil more. Kiu

Okay :) So remove the light beam thingy and toy around with the materials :)
I feel it needs something though or it just looks too plain?

Make better material for balls
Some color variations will be cool..
Play more with shape of that metaball, add more spheres to make variations and use different sizes of spheres..

Trust me listen to Mio
He knows a lot about balls

^lol^

I really like the lights. ;o
The balls dont care. Just the room with the lights are cool. :P

Hide the pipe with tags but keep it in the reflection.

Thanks for the comments, Im working on a v2 ill upload soon :)