Very Abstract

I think this is a really cool piece, just made it for fun and it turned out great.
CnC please :D
http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/...aff/Circle.png

http://i1106.photobucket.com/albums/...ff/Circle2.png

I like your connectors :D thast cool stuff ^^

You know what I think would look good with this but still keep it clean and simple looking ? Give them some shadow, and I see you are atempting drip as well, maybe put a little more in on the rest of the open space, atm my eye is pulled over there becuase of the unique attention it got. Like just a little more drip in the center action. You already have good show of depth becuase of the way you are using the connectors to show depth, just g o a step farther with shadow.

Putting some shadow onto these orbs from the cconnectors imo would boost the tag in style and attitude :D

Kepp at it, I totally love it !!

How would you suggest i add shadow?

Good thing you're trying new stuff.
It's a very good start, that's what I can say but it seems like a wip atm.

I would suggest you start adding in more inside shapes onto the current shapes you have now to add more detail.
Even your background. Try adding a design (not circular) to it so it isn't completely boring.

The connectors are pretty cool and I think you should try adding some drips.
Detail, my friend. That's all it needs.
Kiu!

yeah in deed this is nice bro , i like the color key u got going on to show colors used in this . i agree with slave above a nice cast shadow would look nice on this tag , your doing a great job bro and i like your trying so many new things kiu m8 :) will have to make a gift for u for most improvement.

Thanks guys, will ad more details later, got to do some stuff now, but will update with a V2 later :D

awesome bro can't wait to see the updates you made on it :) kiu the good work .

V2 Added :D

Shading compo and detail needs a lot of work. Also get rid of that fucking borders.

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Originally Posted by wrftw

Shading compo and detail needs a lot of work. Also get rid of that fucking borders.

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lol, y u no like my border? But okay, thanks :D

yeah the overall shapes thing looks good,,
try to add something to the background because its a bit boring
try to give the depth to the small and big balls..
lighting would be nice too...like the farther the object the darker and vice versa
the color scheme thing at the bottom doesnt work nice...make it a lil simpler
other than that its a nice idea KIU

h bravo on the drip, I totally love it :D Love how you made and extra connector squeezing the new circle, very cool indeed.

The triangles I'm not digging, I might have gone for odd shaped more smooth object, more like warped circles that the connectors were coming out of. But still non the less looking better K :D

Now what I meant about shadin was to give your orbs more of a sphere shape to them, I see that you already have a tag on them, maybe put it in darker or put the burn tool on those babys, just to punch it up more.

Hope I helped ot some ^^
+ Rep if you liked my c&c k!! <3

i gave you some slave and yep indeed i too like the second most and the triangles make me think of PlayStation. was you looking at a PlayStation paddle when u made this lol ?
any ways im going to agree with slave above try that bro and see what a v3 looks like kiu bud .

The second version is a lot better, try to work on the background.
Keep on going, it's still not complete!

looks sexy, how did u make it?