It's not finished ...
http://www.geocities.com/real_lietuvis/vector1.jpg
what ya think ?
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It's not finished ...
http://www.geocities.com/real_lietuvis/vector1.jpg
what ya think ?
Looks really good
I like the abstract roughness.
all i see is the red x of doom
damn geocities >.<
take a look later , please
Imageshack is your friend
it's up now .. for me ..
not bad, not bad at all.
Edit: Alas i cannot critique it beyond that, as i know very little of vector based artwork and how to do it.
Try to consolidate and smooth. Pick three or four colors that you're going to work with and use only those colors. Use the zoom and make every shape as smooth as you can.
It has potential but it needs work still.
um... if you properly vectored you wouldnt have the squiggly lines, this looks like one of the "fake vector" things that uses filters
no offense, but try to make them straight, IMO it looks better
I disagree db. I think this looks quite good. I like how theres no face adds alot of meaning. Its good. Could use some improvement, but i like it.
Hmm db has a point. I know good vectors that look like this, like spekta's stuff:
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17564257/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/17022920/
http://www.deviantart.com/view/18047031/
but this looks as if you used the cutout filter actualy. :( Sorry, i don't like it if you just filter-whored it.
ye, as i was saying, it sometimes works, but yours is just too squiglly..
can i see the original pic?
thats super cool artwork
it's my first vector .. so of course it's not like the other prof vectors.anyway .. im busy with a new one .. what ya think ?
http://www.geocities.com/lietuvisalbert/Vector_2.jpg
Better, but still too jagged. Smooth, not softened, edges.
I don't know..does it say anwhere that vector has to be smooth, or is it just an accepted fact that vectore should be smooth? I kinda like the rougher look.. it's kinda like his (sorry if you're female) own style being integraded into a common form of art.
I'm saying what I think looks good, not reading from a checklist.
thx for the comments , guys .. im still learning.Hope to get better soon ^^
"hello cutout filter? How are you today?"
Don't use the cutout filter, AND if i'm mistaken in any way, make your images with more detail and definition. And use illustrator, not photoshop.
WOOOOOQuote:
Originally posted by Spekta@Jul 10 2005, 05:19 PM
"hello cutout filter? How are you today?"
Don't use the cutout filter, AND if i'm mistaken in any way, make your images with more detail and definition. And use illustrator, not photoshop.
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its spekta B)
(i know you from bs... but you prolly dont know me, even tho im reasonably active)
sweet lol, and yeah... i thought it was cutout too...
btw, aint seen much work from you recently :(
The newer one is a tad better, but still lame, and it is NOT vector. Check the lips out, they don't have anti-aliasing. If it was done with pen tool it'd be anti-aliased. Nice try though, really.
