Thalass,an abstract

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07-12-2011, 07:55 PM
Necrothalass

Thalass,an abstract

http://fc00.deviantart.net/fs71/f/20...xx-d3nl7b3.png

V2
http://img14.imageshack.us/img14/848/thalass.png
I know it looks monotone,but i was trying to make it look like an "under water shark attack" not literally of course cuz it is an abstract and Thalass means sea.
and it's been a month,i was on vacation and been trying to produce dubstep.
07-12-2011, 07:59 PM
Synsational

Hehe, you should name your next tag "Excuses, bro".

But looks good, the bright smudge spots look a tad bit distracting from the name though. Otherwise your concept was good and execution was too.

I'd suggest not leaving so much negative space next time (Black)
07-12-2011, 08:06 PM
Necrothalass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syn

Hehe, you should name your next tag "Excuses, bro".

But looks good, the bright smudge spots look a tad bit distracting from the name though. Otherwise your concept was good and execution was too.

I'd suggest not leaving so much negative space next time (Black)

So i should change the canvas size
07-12-2011, 08:06 PM
Synsational

Crop the back with the cropping tool
07-12-2011, 08:17 PM
Necrothalass

Quote:

Originally Posted by Syn

Crop the back with the cropping tool

What would you mean by "The Back"?
07-13-2011, 08:07 AM
Necrothalass

http://s3.amazonaws.com/kym-assets/p...gif?1300194316
07-13-2011, 08:41 AM
Wolvy

I like it, but why is it so blurred?
07-13-2011, 08:57 AM
.Stuuuuu

Text and effects around the text are quite nice, but I agree that it looks over-blurred.

There is is also way to much blackness on the sides, and even if your going for a monotone tag, you can still use different tones of red to make it a bit more appealing to the eye.
07-13-2011, 11:08 AM
Xelo

add yellow and white sparks to liven up the colors!!
07-14-2011, 10:02 AM
Necrothalass

I kinda get what you're saying,but i don't.So anyone wanna collab onto it?
And a 1 star rating :| Why does everyone hate me?
07-15-2011, 02:17 AM
ascheb

i dont hate you!!!! :)... I think some ppl wonder why u struggle to listen and learn from advice... but really the only one effected by that is u :/

with this tag i can see what you were going for... the burning text... a cool start it needs more depth... but less blur :) try adding some more black to some places. use the dodge and burn tool! It works miracles :)
07-15-2011, 02:25 AM
Necrothalass

Cause I don't get most of the vocabulary used and you say more black,others say less black and would you say the whole thing is blurry or just a specific part?
07-15-2011, 02:29 AM
ascheb

the text isnt-- but the blur is overwhelming... u want the details to pop out in the kind of piece try sharpening more of the effects... this is a really hard concept to achieve, the overall composition of your tag i mean... something burning in flames... its like really hard.
07-16-2011, 02:56 PM
Necrothalass

Quote:

Originally Posted by ascheb

the text isnt-- but the blur is overwhelming... u want the details to pop out in the kind of piece try sharpening more of the effects... this is a really hard concept to achieve, the overall composition of your tag i mean... something burning in flames... its like really hard.

Gotcha ;)