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btw: on the treath i rofled becouse 2 guys said they where voting for me and i got 1 vote >.>

Work on your colors, contrast, and effects more. I see quality issues all over the place. The colors are monotone and not all that appealing because of the renders colors. The smudge is okay but that's like, all that was done it seems. So it feels emptyish. Your contrast is like non existent. It's too mid-toned.

no more cnc :(

You got the same CnC like 100 times xD
Spice it up bro!

No on teh double focal it ruins the composition. Try to work more on the blending man.

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Originally Posted by andoytoys

No on teh double focal it ruins the composition. Try to work more on the blending man.

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I hope you don't mean all double focals ruin composition. I do double focals from time to time and they turn out fine in terms of composition.

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Originally Posted by Manga

I hope you don't mean all double focals ruin composition. I do double focals from time to time and they turn out fine in terms of composition.

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are we settin up a debate over here? :))) nothing to serious, i'm sure you know what i mean about that. :3

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Originally Posted by Manga

I hope you don't mean all double focals ruin composition. I do double focals from time to time and they turn out fine in terms of composition.

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The idea of a focal is to draw attention and give your eyes a place to settle, so yeah double focals are by definition a bad idea in my humble opinion.

i was jking when i said id vote u, everything needs work in this tag

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Originally Posted by Aether

The idea of a focal is to draw attention and give your eyes a place to settle, so yeah double focals are by definition a bad idea in my humble opinion.

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well in some point this is true. :P but there too are a lot of double focaled tags that looks great. But in this case teh composition didn't work out that much, Thats why i wus pointing out about teh composition to be fixed. :)

1px smudging is meant to be used for detail not All over smudging. You need to build up more tones into your pieces. start with a 7px brush 60-90% hardness 90% strength, with a base layer in a dull colour, like a grey blue for expample.
Then work your way towards white with brushing and smudging. lowering brush size each time..

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Originally Posted by Lewk

1px smudging is meant to be used for detail not All over smudging. You need to build up more tones into your pieces. start with a 7px brush 60-90% hardness 90% strength, with a base layer in a dull colour, like a grey blue for expample.
Then work your way towards white with brushing and smudging. lowering brush size each time..

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i did...

I think the blending and colour is your biggest problem here ex, the colours don't match the focals in any way and don't unit the two enough to be eye candy, as said the 1pk brush is a lovely go, but you used it all over instead of for focusing the attention onto your renders, would have looked nicer to see larger size brush moving inwards to your focals with the 1px, as well as overlapping them cleaner and giving it a smoother feel, but again the colour imo is the biggest prob becuase if you would have used tones matching the renders it would have felt more uniform and more fitting.

good attepmt tho and keep at this and or work out something with this style and you will see yourself take on a new opinion :D