has frozen me forever

Finally I came up with something I quite like.
What do you guys think about this one?

http://img854.imageshack.us/img854/6604/motera.jpg

i dislike the left part a lot. if you smudged it, or just an empty block, idk. really sweet tag though

as wr said left side distracts, also I am not a fan off dup focals and scanlines.
other then that very nice!!

V2?
http://img683.imageshack.us/img683/5273/moterap.jpg

Prefer v1 even though it's distracting.

Same. V1 was better imo.

God damnit!!
So. pro-photoshopers, any real ideas how to improve this?
You just saying it suck, but don't give any suggestions.
Not argumenting your point sucks.

Make it taller so you see more of her face. Its the composition thats killing it. Thats all

i hate tags with the dup face stuff but in this case i really like it lol i think the text works great and also i think maybe add some more detail to the bg on the left side :) it looks like of erased or like you forget to do something to it overall a great tag man glad to see ya makin stuff again :)

I don't suggest making it taller, would prob mess with your effects and shit, assuming this isn't cropped.

v1 , but instead of having a dup face place something else there , maybe a shape or some effects , maybe even some large text

Gar chill, i think its awesome, im not fan of little sigs but i really like this one, and i do like the left part, it's like duble focal ;] just maybe add a bit more [longer] space in left, so it would look like 2 sigs with same focal put together, but the sigs would look a bit diferent [ other effets maybe ] and it would be really original sig in my opinion ;]

can i collab zis? :DD it has sooo much potential tbh. :">

Yeah. Thanks guys. :)
Sure andoytoys. Will send the .psd soon. Let's see what can you do with this one.

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Originally Posted by Garis

Yeah. Thanks guys. :)
Sure andoytoys. Will send the .psd soon. Let's see what can you do with this one.

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I'll make a mess out of this mafo. http://i.backpackgnome.com/t12398762...8.61564114.jpg

i like the detail and idea of this tag but i dislike the left side and the text . sry but that text is just distracting to me .

Let's what andoytoys will come up.

It's fine.
Appealing ;D