Batman grunge

ok i was in the mood to make a batman sig ;)

so here it is

say me whatta u think

http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3...mangrunge2.png

and a Spiderman version ;)

http://img31.imageshack.us/img31/205...rmangrunge.png

its a good start man both look unfinished follow some tuts man and try some new things :) i really like the start of the spider man one tho keep workin man

They need work. You're lacking several components in your sig. Like Oathy said hit up some tuts.

Spidey has more potential than batman btw.

this is smart. :P i love teh brushes though the tag overall is too monotone and teh flow is undefined. FIX those two and this tag will be a wowser.

Ok ill do :)


I really want to imprpve myself As a gfx maker so..

Ill post the newer hopefully better version here today

Try moving your renders to the slight left or right of the centre, check up on the Rule Of Thirds. When it's too far to the left or right it makes it pretty difficult to work with. The spiderman one shows promise, get some smexi fx going on, check up the thousands of tutorials and you'll do fine ;)

read some tuts. especially about composition. gl

I have to agree with Oath! Looking through some tutorials will help you progress.

well tuts are nice and all but if u want to just try things out just mess on a 500 x 500 canvas with all your tool and get a feel of what they can do for you . then i would suggest trying to get in some effects behind spider man and maybe download some resources i had a few links for you but don't know them off hand maybe someone that knows them can share with you . best of luck m8

Ok ill try :)

Ill move the batman :)

And make some effects behind spiderman

Ow btw i will post some work
Of me just screwen around hope you ll see the post :)

Abd give feedback as i said in the OP i want to improve myself

Hey i made some changes ;)

Here my first Versiion ( for comparison )

http://img577.imageshack.us/img577/3...mangrunge2.png

Here my Second Version ( after tips of you guys )

http://img15.imageshack.us/img15/2058/batmangrunge3.png

As i dont feel the need to create a new thread about this
Ill just post it here :)

This what i am currently working on:

http://img90.imageshack.us/img90/623...awesomealp.png

Okay about the first 2 tags,

Yur batman has a major problem. You have created 2 focals one is the batman symbol and the second is batman. When working in tags you should try to base your image around one major focal, not having the viewers eyes going everywhere. Secondly, you did better moving your batman over but as you can see from your batman that he has light thast hitting his chest, yet there is no light in your tag doing that.
Because you are trying new things I would suggest to you for now to work with your renders, example this badman is dark behind him and light falling on his face and chest, so try and make your b/g and lights do th very same thing, later when you become more experienced you can start to manipulate your focals to be darkened and lightened where you desire.
For fixing the double focal part I would suggest to you to either take out your big batman symbol or to move it more behind him.

p.s you did start a new thread about this creep image and I commented, so I won't comment again on it.