clean blue business card

hi everywun


http://fc01.deviantart.net/fs71/i/20...99-d50ptal.png

what you think about it :P ?

You could work on kerning a little bit. Better typography. Overall it isn't so bad though. I like the colours used.

It reminds me of chewing gum, called aqua kiss from mentos. Nice though i really like the color balance

It has a great feel to it, but like Kroniik said, it could use better typography.
Maybe experiment and try to put the text somewhere else :P
Good job though, looks professional :)

i'll ask my typografy teacher to help me today :D

Kroniik what do you exactly mean with kerning ? :P

thanks ! for the comments

http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Kerning

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i'll ask my typografy teacher to help me today :D

Kroniik what do you exactly mean with kerning ? :P

thanks ! for the comments

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oh haha sorry :P

oh i get it :P its called "spatiering" in the netherlands (or just spacing xD)

yea i will need to take a look at that it's a bit off :P thanks

sepcifically look at your name one :)...also if you like designing business cards you can make money out of it :)...let me know if you're interested :)

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sepcifically look at your name one :)...also if you like designing business cards you can make money out of it :)...let me know if you're interested :)

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yea i'm kidna intrestet :P bud i guess you are doing it with graphicriver :3 ?

Yeah I am with Graphic River currently :)...it's not so bad actually, small amount of income on the side :P...doesn't hurt me :P

Graphic river? Anyone is going to tell this?

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Graphic river? Anyone is going to tell this?

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GraphicRiver.net

if you're going to sign up...do it under my ref ;) if you don't mind.

http://graphicriver.net?ref=EliIsakov

:P...it's great for selling graphics and all XD

i'm already a publisher there :3 altough they didn't accept any of my works bud i can understand that :3

How do you do these epic 3D effects to show things off? D=

its a standart 3d mokup :P

Standard mock up? Can u explain? Im dutch

een standaard 3d bestand waar je alleen de afbeelding hoeft te verwisselen :3 als je even googled vind je verschijdenen van deze mock-ups

ja ja lol :P...I don't know anything in Dutch XD...anyway..........
If you need help with getting items aproved on GR and all..hit me up on skype: NovruzeliHuseynov I'll help you out.

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een standaard 3d bestand waar je alleen de afbeelding hoeft te verwisselen :3 als je even googled vind je verschijdenen van deze mock-ups

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haha :P it isn't one of the easy'st languages :P
just told him a simple explanation what a mock-up is :P

i'll add u on skype ! :D i jsut uploaded this to graphicriver so all i can do is wait :P or design a new one :3 xD

yeah man keep designing new ones :)...don't stop...don't quit XD....there is money to be mad, if you're willing to put time into it.

This piece actually gets me activated to do stuff like that, great job. Btw can anybody make a real good tut about typography. I have read the basic text tut, but still have problems. And i see it coming back at a lot of people. Please?

Btw bedankt voor de uitleg wat een mock-up is

*english version*

Did you see enable suck on apathys balls?

One day, preferabbly once I have time from my full time web/graphic job, and also a couple of side projects that I have to finish...shall make a Video tutorial on typography :) *once can only wish*

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Yeah I am with Graphic River currently :)...it's not so bad actually, small amount of income on the side :P...doesn't hurt me :P

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Aware.