C4D STYLE

My second signature of this style
http://i.imgur.com/RaZkl.png

Yafe meod, aval....-

IDK not feeling the piece...color wise not my kind of colors :D

No depth and the lighting is off.

What this piece really needs is some good depth
Try and blur some of the c4ds and add some better lighting
Also try and add something to add some wow factor because the effects pretty much all look the exact same

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Originally Posted by +s9.KroniiK

Yafe meod, aval....-

IDK not feeling the piece...color wise not my kind of colors :D

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WTF R U israeli?

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Originally Posted by +s9.KroniiK

Yafe meod, aval....-

IDK not feeling the piece...color wise not my kind of colors :D

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TODA (:

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Originally Posted by .Void

No depth and the lighting is off.

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Tnx

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Originally Posted by +Josh Fx

What this piece really needs is some good depth
Try and blur some of the c4ds and add some better lighting
Also try and add something to add some wow factor because the effects pretty much all look the exact same

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Thank's

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Originally Posted by runiosdesign

WTF R U israeli?

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CAMA YESH CAN?!

Work on depth, composition as there are like two focals almost with that light, and colors. Not bad though

Ken betah she ani Israeli...lama lo :P.....lo odea kama yesh pho....lo hoshev arhbe meod, ve sliha al ha ivrit sheli...lo dibarti gvar 7-8 sanim :P

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Originally Posted by +s9.KroniiK

Ken betah she ani Israeli...lama lo :P.....lo odea kama yesh pho....lo hoshev arhbe meod, ve sliha al ha ivrit sheli...lo dibarti gvar 7-8 sanim :P

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חחחחח אני מקווה שאתה עדיין יודע לקרוא לפחות...

Not a bad attempt here, well done dude, the blue suits the render
but here's a few things:
-It looks like you've used just one c4d, and duplicated. You should always try to vary the tag, use parts of a c4d that look completely different, or entirely different. Also, try to use ones that have more then one colour, or the tag ends up a tad too monotone.
Always try to pair a colour with it's opposite (i think that's the word) Of the top of my head, blue would be orange. It's always nice to mix warm colours with cold colours to create a balance
Another thing is that light. It's just, wrong. no not wrong, inconsistent. The render has shadows on the left side of his face right? And on the left side of his neck. would this really be created by a light source on his left? I don't think so.
Always take note of the natural light on the render, and play to that. or the depth just seems wrong. Lighting helps depth. Remember that

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Originally Posted by Intrepidmisfortune

Not a bad attempt here, well done dude, the blue suits the render
but here's a few things:
-It looks like you've used just one c4d, and duplicated. You should always try to vary the tag, use parts of a c4d that look completely different, or entirely different. Also, try to use ones that have more then one colour, or the tag ends up a tad too monotone.
Always try to pair a colour with it's opposite (i think that's the word) Of the top of my head, blue would be orange. It's always nice to mix warm colours with cold colours to create a balance
Another thing is that light. It's just, wrong. no not wrong, inconsistent. The render has shadows on the left side of his face right? And on the left side of his neck. would this really be created by a light source on his left? I don't think so.
Always take note of the natural light on the render, and play to that. or the depth just seems wrong. Lighting helps depth. Remember that

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My goodness!! Lol, I couldn't have said it better myself:D

I agree with everything intrep offered.

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Originally Posted by runiosdesign

חחחחח אני מקווה שאתה עדיין יודע לקרוא לפחות...

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lol kolkah tov, aval kchat :)

[QUOTE=+s9.KroniiK;639967]Yafe meod, aval....-

IDK not feeling the piece...color wise not my kind of colors :D[/QUOTE
israelim hogegim po ah?

פיי לא ציפיתי לככה ישראלים.

Thx to everyone!

כוסאומו לאן שלא תברח בכל חור יהיה ישראלים :P

hhahaha :P....betah she iye israelim... :P.....lama, ata lo rohce otanu ?? ;)...... :P......


ok my israeli ahm, ahotim...whatever you guys are ;)......this topic is going off-topic...with us talking...lets keep it clean...

If you guys have skype add me: NovruzeliHuseynov

the soft brushing is bad

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Originally Posted by +s9.KroniiK

hhahaha :P....betah she iye israelim... :P.....lama, ata lo rohce otanu ?? ;)...... :P......


ok my israeli ahm, ahotim...whatever you guys are ;)......this topic is going off-topic...with us talking...lets keep it clean...

If you guys have skype add me: NovruzeliHuseynov

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i add u יענו הוספתי אותך תאשר :P

ישראלים זה דיבור..אין פורום חתימות טוב בארץ