Newest work from Tenchido

Here you go guys...My newest work... (it's going to be in a competition so i need alot of critisim)
http://pix7.com/0605/6621w_t-pay-web.gif

Anybody????

I dont like the border. Just try a black 1px.

Also I dont like the pixel text at the bottom. I like the bg and render. Good job.

i cant read the the pixel text at the bottom at all. throw on a 1 px stroke then change its opacity. Also the bg just seems a bit plain to me. I like the theme you have there though.

i aint to keen on it personaly but good sig.

It's overall decent, but I agree with Kanji. I have no real problem with the border. Hm, perhaps you could've done more work with the fire? having blended it more, with different uses/additions of layers with incorporations of different filters? Either way, I like the sig, a lot. Nice job.

~Manuel

hmmmmm, i love you techido, but nt too sure this is a piece of art I like.

I mean, i love the colours, but maybe improve the border?

http://img108.echo.cx/img108/1654/cr...tpayweb4co.gif
Is that better?

jut looks like you resized the sig and added a 1 px border? I still think you could make taht text more readable with what i said before, anywho keep trying new things with it eh?

change the border and I the fonts .. colours look good

I like the render, and text is now better, but for me... I think that theme sig should be little darker... just my oppinion.. dont ruin it by listening a noob like me :)

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Originally posted by Croxy@Jun 29 2005, 07:47 AM
I like the render, and text is now better, but for me... I think that theme sig should be little darker... just my oppinion.. dont ruin it by listening a noob like me :)

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Hahaha...The only thing i did was slap a 1 px black border on it...Hmm... :lol:

I think the text is just fine, i can read it fine. Over all i see no really big flaws. Way to job man.

the reflection of tenchido looks like its getting out of place especially right part. maybe also remove the bg blocking the bars at the bottom right so peeps would know what the sigs about even before readin the text. keep it up dude :D