Some poetry i did.

Look into my soul, search the whole

With you in sight, I can take flight

I never felt this way before

For you id wait, till my life numbs

I can be free, just say you will wait’



Just say youll find it true

All these fellings within you

Ill be there waiting

Your radiance exceeds that of the brightest star

When you are away, my heart is broken apart.

When you are around all is perfect and complete.

My anger is no longer there, for you take away all the pain

Jackie you are truly amazingly wonderful


These feelings I am expressing, all are from your great soul

This relationship I hope will last forever, till kingdom come

Just say, to me all these feelings aren’t just me being dumb

That perfect smile upon your beautiful face,

Is what allows me to fight each day in its place

wow, thats amazing, seriously dude. Great job.

I love it how the words can allow you to form your own image rather than just having an image there infront of you.

Thanks man. I had some things chaning in my life, so i decided to express them in a new way.

Great job indeed BFG

What was the event that happened? You moving away from a lover?

Me getting a lover =D

lolz. im not into poetry and stuffs like that. although i get the meaning of it but the way is being said isnt straight forward :o. but still its hard getting the words to flow together. good job bfg :D congratz ^^

Thats pretty good, nice job...

I wouldnt think of you of doing poetry, learn something new everyday

Bump =D

lol, you getting a new lover? :D gj.

(you should post a pic ... .. . . . . ^_^ )

Haha, Alright since it was requested =D

http://xs35.xs.to/pics/05265/jakc.jpg