Another one of my friend's shoots

http://i862.photobucket.com/albums/a...vegetation.png

I had such high hopes for this piece, could really use some advice to get it where I want it to be. wanted to incorporate all water/grass/earth/stone/fire/air into it.

Question. Is this 'friend' really just an adult tv model that you like to make up scenarios for you two being together in a last ditched attempt to regain your ever decreasing sanity?

Na I'm kidding, nice piece dude.

loool her twitters @kraykhloe if you wanna check her out shes aspiring to be a playboy model lol shame cause shes smart has way more potential than that

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=Kl6UCiQGsXo I found one of her videos. Lol.

Nice pic, btw. Kiu, Zand.

I would squeeze those two.....

two....

umm...

Thighs, yeah thighs. Mmm.

lmao oh god that video. i hate it so much but so many seem to love it. and easy tiger that other girls 16

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Originally Posted by zandwitdatlean

lmao oh god that video. i hate it so much but so many seem to love it. and easy tiger that other girls 16

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http://www.thecinemasource.com/blog/...ads/Ted-16.jpg

Somewhere we have a terrible father to thank for this great moment.

LOL

lol @ the first comment on the vid

lol to the vid, the running back and forth was a nice touch. As for the first piece in this thread, it's a bit messy, the flow is all over the place, there is just too much going on. simplify with one element or blend the others together better, kiu nice work so far.

It's quite a nice piece however a little messy. My main issue is with the bluring of the background. That mountain on the left looks too close to be that blurry. As well as things that aren't in focus being blurry, you need to take into account the blur of how far things are away from you. For starters try this. Focus on something. Notice how those things really far away are very blurred but theres things alot closer to wherever your focusing that aren't as blurred.
As for the effects you've done on her, I would take the massive white lines out, as well as that blue splatter on her face

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Originally Posted by Intrepidmisfortune

It's quite a nice piece however a little messy. My main issue is with the bluring of the background. That mountain on the left looks too close to be that blurry. As well as things that aren't in focus being blurry, you need to take into account the blur of how far things are away from you. For starters try this. Focus on something. Notice how those things really far away are very blurred but theres things alot closer to wherever your focusing that aren't as blurred.
As for the effects you've done on her, I would take the massive white lines out, as well as that blue splatter on her face

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I don't know what happened to you while you were away, but now.. you seem to have finally become a useful member of society, a cog in the machine working tirelessly to make the world a better place. To gift the world with your immense knowledge and wisdom.

I'm proud of you Intrepid, I'm proud of you.

While you're still down in the rubbish heap talking about your bum and moaning about guys in skinny jeans?

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Originally Posted by Intrepidmisfortune

While you're still down in the rubbish heap talking about your bum and moaning about guys in skinny jeans?

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It's not too bad, I have your ego for company.
xD