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î made this , im really happy with this , it will be the main page of my site like says title , and it will direct you to section of my site which will have their own design ( interface) ..... need some good comments , how many as possible :) especially from TAco , Illegal and #43...... no offense to others , but theyre good at websites making ;) :D
i made 2 versions , which should i use?????
1)
http://dick.derkan.net/maina1.jpg
2)
http://dick.derkan.net/maina2.jpg
COOMMENTS PLEAAASEEEE :D
You should use the first. Fucking good jb man, the whole thing is just really stylish and modern. Love it.
The first, Also well done. But you don't want to have to go back to the main page each time you want to go to a new page in your website, keep that in mind.
First one! omg.... they're hot! :D But on the orange-red orb thing, should it say created by dick? not create... dunno. Or maybe it does say created and i'm just really tired. o____O;; But anyways, it's still awesome. ^^
Hmmm really nice, the first one definetly..
I tried to find some c+c, and only came up with this (so good job :-D)
The black text is kinda strain on the eyes IMO. Have you tried like white? I dunno, it just doesnt look right.
Do you know flash? You could really do some cool animation stuff with this, like when u hover over have the bars do something as the ball spins around or somethin?
gj again
-David-
Dick, congratulations. that's amazing cool. I like the 1st one more
First one seems to have the simplistic tencholigtic feel to it..
hteyre both same , but the 1st one have thos lines around...........Quote:
Originally posted by randyrandy@A Minute Ago
First one seems to have the simplistic tencholigtic feel to it..
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THX for comments guyz ;)
some more suggestions welcome !
it says, "create by dick" instead of "created".. you might want to change that :P
oh thx for this ;) i must find all those little bugs ;)Quote:
Originally posted by deadloader@A Minute Ago
it says, "create by dick" instead of "created".. you might want to change that :P
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LMAO nice find there dead!! :)
Anyways those lines make it feel digital..like those funky binoculars in certain games - they got lots of digital stuff in em.
you're welcome and really nice, love it very spacious which is kind of nice.... but i don't like orange and black but it's alright... nice idea :D
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First one! omg.... they're hot! :D But on the orange-red orb thing, should it say created by dick? not create... dunno. Or maybe it does say created and i'm just really tired. o____O;; But anyways, it's still awesome. ^^
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LMAO nice find there dead!! :)
Anyways those lines make it feel digital..like those funky binoculars in certain games - they got lots of digital stuff in em.
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You plan on animating it?
-David-
Very very nice man. Thanks for asking me, i feel special now. I remember when you first came to the site, and you were always doing sites. You have really improved. I really love the smooth feel on this whole thing. A couple things.
The lines in the first one are very nice, i definetly like this better than the second. Very smooth, modern feel. The only problem is that there's some consistency problems. On the right side they all seem to overlap, and connect that way. Don't get me wrong, that looks good, but on the left side they are kinda left open. IDK, just makes it feel kinda detached from itself IMO.
On the "info" bar, i think that maybe you should fade it a little more before the sphere. Seems like it doesn't get faded as much as the other ones.
The text on them seems OK as black, but maybe toy with other fonts. I think pixel font is the way to go, but try a different anti-aliasing option. It seems a little blurry.
Now, the orb thing. Pretty nice, but a couple things with it. 1: i think you should do the whole thing with vectors. You can try it with shape layers, but you don't need to, you can even try doing it with selections taken from paths. That'll get rid of the jaggedness around the edges of the circles. The whole orb looks very nice, but may be a little bit too "busy", have too much stuff going on. The main thing that i don't like is near the top the contrast between orange and white. Seems like a very sudden transition, and it isn't very appealing to the eyes. I don't know how you could blend it in better, but just toy around with it.
All in all it is a very nice smooth, inventive design, and i really like it. I can tell you have come a long ways with this, great job man. The weakest point i would say is the orb, but that's just me. It is a very solid layout all in all.
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Originally posted by Illegalx17@7 Minutes Ago
Very very nice man.* Thanks for asking me, i feel special now.* I remember when you first came to the site, and you were always doing sites.* You have really improved.* I really love the smooth feel on this whole thing.* A couple things.
The lines in the first one are very nice, i definetly like this better than the second.* Very smooth, modern feel.* The only problem is that there's some consistency problems.* On the right side they all seem to overlap, and connect that way.* Don't get me wrong, that looks good, but on the left side they are kinda left open.* IDK, just makes it feel kinda detached from itself IMO.*
On the "info" bar, i think that maybe you should fade it a little more before the sphere.* Seems like it doesn't get faded as much as the other ones.
The text on them seems OK as black, but maybe toy with other fonts.* I think pixel font is the way to go, but try a different anti-aliasing option.* It seems a little blurry.* *
Now, the orb thing.* Pretty nice, but a couple things with it.* 1: i think you should do the whole thing with vectors.* You can try it with shape layers, but you don't need to, you can even try doing it with selections taken from paths.* That'll get rid of the jaggedness around the edges of the circles.* The whole orb looks very nice, but may be a little bit too "busy", have too much stuff going on.* The main thing that i don't like is near the top the contrast between orange and white.* Seems like a very sudden transition, and it isn't very appealing to the eyes.* I don't know how you could blend it in better, but just toy around with it.
All in all it is a very nice smooth, inventive design, and i really like it.* I can tell you have come a long ways with this, great job man.* The weakest point i would say is the orb, but that's just me.* It is a very solid layout all in all.
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thx for comment i really much much aprecciate it ;)
and thx to the lines u found that theyre crossing , i want them to be some free space between them , ii will fix it ;)
y with sites im tryin my best , today i have good day i made 4 layouts :)
this , layout on info , and two others ;)
tomorrow i will show u layout on info Hes CRAZY :D :lol:
thx again
Get a new name, it doenst make gramatical sense. The non-border looks better. Get a more readable and less blurry pixel font. Turn the mode onto none and shorten up the lines behind it.
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Get a new name, it doenst make gramatical sense. The non-border looks better. Get a more readable and less blurry pixel font. Turn the mode onto none and shorten up the lines behind it.
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what you mean by new name?? that i shoul change my nick?? :huh:
he means that its not a very professional name, and that you shud change the name to more of a site name, like "Blah Designs" (or hopefully sumthing more original)
anyways, my veiw, its very nice, but dude, thats not a main page, its a splash page, and theres no where for the links to go, apart from a new window, which every person veiwing the site will HATE bitterly.
Dick Designs is cool, alliteration, thats catchy - keep it. Love the page btw. :D
The first is better with the borders, very nice job, keep this up and you'll be a great web designer.
