hey look at this, its not entierly finished, as i need to improve the look of the beam but please tell me what you think of it so far. i think i need to change some colours aswell
anywho its my first ever animation so dont be too harsh please
07-24-2005, 02:03 PM
supernova
anyone???
07-24-2005, 02:11 PM
dragoneye
welllll. first of all, u need to change the color of the background. its ugly as hell to be honest. the text "the holy reaper" is barely readable, do something about it, change the font and the color.
and the beam doesnt look too good, but its kinda different i guess ;)
and u need a border. 1 pixel and black
but. keep practicing ;)
07-24-2005, 02:15 PM
undertone
bad image quality, bad text, bad colours, and pretty decent animation. keep trying man.
you may want to get the basics of sig making before you start animations.
07-24-2005, 02:38 PM
villian
no offence but it is the uglyist halo2 sig ive ever seen
07-24-2005, 10:10 PM
supernova
i changed some things about it and came up with this, im thinking of making the text colour to look like a computer chip, so i might work on that and see what it is like, untill then can you please tell me what you think of the newer one
you gotta work on that text man, its just... ugly no offence. the tech behind it doesnt work well, it makes the quote thing hard to read, and just makes it too difficult on the eyes. the bg is alright, needs a little more contrast. you may want to make the render blue, like the bg.
keep trying man
07-24-2005, 10:18 PM
supernova
ok im on it, thanks for the advice, btw do you know how to load up new text because i tried to put a new font i downloaded, i put it in the windows file under fonts but it still doesnt work, do you know how i could get it too?
thanks for helping
07-24-2005, 11:26 PM
Adam
Make sure PS is closed when you DL the font. 2nd one looks much better. yeah text needs work. Nice animation.
07-25-2005, 12:06 AM
supernova
well i changed the font a bit, and here it is. i think it still needs work, i havent got many fonts.
and i have another animation sig coming in a minite because i have nearly done it, when i post it tell me what you think, and tell me what you think of this one.
thanks
07-25-2005, 12:13 AM
Skarjoko
Your getting on track supernova, but you will soon need to learn art concepts.
Good job. Kinda reminds me of me when I started PS...was just too scared to even touch animation though.
07-25-2005, 12:39 AM
supernova
heres my newest one, i think it needs a bit of shadow or something but im not sure. well its a start.
it's ok but again the background is a tad ugly... :mellow:
the text doesn't fit well and it needs a border or something also make the render bigger and maybe un blend it a little it's overblended and starting to look a bit blurry
07-25-2005, 07:22 AM
supernova
ok i edited what you said deadloader, how about this then
:D :D and which do you prefer this one or the plasma one? :D :D
07-25-2005, 08:36 AM
natso
this one is wayy better. keep it up:)
07-25-2005, 08:45 AM
supernova
oh yeah, i got a reply with noo bad remark yay :lol: :lol:
07-25-2005, 08:50 AM
natso
hehe yeah, well u have to admit, the first 2 were crap.
07-25-2005, 08:55 AM
supernova
true true but im just finding my feet, a baby must crawl before he can walk. hehehe unless its a superbaby of course, they are evil!!!!!!!!!& #33;!!!!
i still a long way to go though thanks :D :D
07-25-2005, 09:49 AM
Adam
Yeah nice animatiion :D Bg and text still need work. Id try a dif color too. Im not liking these light wierd looking colors.