John Terry

Hey guys 2nd attempt @ verticly cnc please

http://i50.tinypic.com/29wv66g.png

if you wna see the render that i started with ill post

bump/..

It looks a bit wild, the c4d is everywhere, there's no real flow, the lighting is also just everywhere. Text needs work too.

I like the colours, though :D Keep it up.

I agree with Sex. The lighting is too strong and the contrast is really work giving it a bland, monotonous look.

lacks flow.. try adding better depth and blending .. KIU :)

Thanks for the help ill keep your comments in mind for my next piece