Call It Bad Weather [WIP]

New SIP, conflicted on the amount going on. Have at it.
EDIT: Fixed the lameness:
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/7589/callv2.png

I dun like it mainly because of the colors, and it seems a bit LQ. maybe try define your focal more mateay

I love you too.
EDIT (totally fixed):
http://img191.imageshack.us/img191/7589/callv2.png

i think the brush is ruining it ...

Maybe...I'll try taking it out and post an update.

what is it exactly? can't see a focal point or determine what it is.

Meant to focus on the guy on the right, I suppose I should've cut the other one out. It's too bad I'm epicly lazy.

LOl i like it, could be a bit better quality, but i like those colors and nice industrial feeling about it

Yeah, I would remove the stripy brush but I accidentally put it on the same layer as my render so it's perma-there.

I'm loving your pen work but I can't get a clear focal if you catch my meaning.