ok here it is
http://img302.imageshack.us/img302/4687/rainsig6ow.gif
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ok here it is
http://img302.imageshack.us/img302/4687/rainsig6ow.gif
BG color needs to be changed to fit the render. But good for your first.
I wish my first was that good. I never knew of places liek this back when i started oh...4 years ago ^^'''. Very nice work, though the rain effect is overused a lot. Don't put the Trulife text so close to the border, and the BG is dark.
Text looks weird try a different font for both of them and try putting that "sometimes..." to the bottom and your name above it because it looks weird with subtext above it.. Also maybe take that effect of the text and blend the render but something else is missing and i'm not quite sure what :huh: good job though love the colour and the brushing but maybe some more colours to it :D nice work
thanx guys for the suggestions ill get rite on it lol