Modern Samurai

[Otaku10]

A good friend told me I should start making wallpapers now. I have been making banners and avatars (my only reason of getting PS two months ago) ever since I got photoshop. Well here goes my wallpaper I made. Comments and critiques are welcome here.

I really didn't had a well thought out plan making this wall. It was more spure of the moment on making this wallpaper. XD

Comments and critques are welcome here.

http://img400.imageshack.us/img400/5...llpaper0ys.jpg

[natso]

mm i lreally like the render but the green BG dont really fit in... i love the BG though.. just not the color.. would love to see more though this just isn't totally it in my opinion. but wait for other to reply.. maybe im wrong.

[undertone]

yeah, that bg would look alot better in grays, or the lime green thats on the render. also try a pixel strech in the bg, behind the bg to give it a little more depth. looks good, but the bg colour looks really off, and theres not much going on in some places.

[Tenchido]

A different background colour would make it alot better looking IMO.

[Otaku10]

Thanks for the comments and suggestions guys. Here goes my newest version of it. I haven't submitted to the animepaper yet.

What you guys think on this version? Better or worst?

http://img310.imageshack.us/img310/6...lpaper16gs.jpg

[undertone]

looks alot better, but parts of the render look a little low quality. you should try and blend a little more, and it looks like you made the render bigger then its supposed to be.

[Otaku10]

Thanks for your comment undertone. Yep, the render is bigger than it was suppose to be.

Okay, here another version of it. After taking advice of fellow wallpaper makers I created this. I change the city in the bg, to a render with better resolution. I also change the character a bit. Well here it is.

http://img3.imageshack.us/img3/5549/mswallpaper9rx.jpg

[undertone]

best one yet, even this time i would like to see more opaque brushing around those buildings, even with some more contrast to make it stand out alot more. the text looks good as ever, and im glad the render doesnt look far too big this time. colours are about right this time, so that works very well.

[Samuel]

I agree tons better man. You need to work on the coloring a little bit. You need to work on the bottom text imo. Looks good tho mate. Keep it up!