the latest try for something decent

[DARKSYDE]

ok fire away c+c
dammit i need some pointers

[dragonlord]

well..
i don't like the border is have used, just use a 1px black border or something like that..
work some more on your text, use a diffferent font maybe..

but nice brushing there and nice multi color there

overall GJ

[RabOwnsYou]

Well, im not sure if you blurred up theheadstone, but its pretty blurry. Distracts me :P

RAb B)

[Quickdust]

I don't really like it, too blurry and the border don't attract me

[ANtidote]

well its ok.. the border and the tomb kill it.
if the tomb had a r.i.p on it maybe.
GOod try tho.

[RAHTING]

Hmm well its better than your current imo but the border kills it you should just put a 1px black border around it. The text im not liking try dafont.com im sure youll find something that will fit better there.

[AcidGlow]

I think the cuts you made outside aren't that good..and you left some white spots on there too..Odd how you didn't notice that..o_0