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  1. #1
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    i just finished this sig. its pretty simple and its ok. i like it.
    take a close look and tell me what is wrong with it.

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    Good man. Its a very original idea, and i like it Nice one mate! :

    RAb B)

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    -The intro is boring,dull..
    -The render is too small for the sig (dunno how many times we've said that...)
    -Background is too repetative and doesn't have a nice flow
    -Sig Needs more colour
    -Too much open space hanging around

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    1. its not supposed to be an intro
    2. the render its not the main theme in the sig.
    3. i used 4 sets of brushes.
    4. thanks for your C+C ( but i know u hate me so)

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    1. It's an intro, or should I call it an outro? To me it looks like the starting of a sig..showing text..then the main theme after..so..an intro..
    But in all fairness ok, I'll call it "the animation".
    "the animation is dull and boring" Better?

    2. That's fine if the render isn't the main thing to grab the attention of ppl.

    3. Those 4 sets seem too similar and just doesn't have a nice flow to it.

    4. Still needs more colour even though you didn't respond to that one. =)

    5. Too much open space, again which you avoided. But that's ok. =)

  6. #6
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    -The brushing isn't too bad.
    -The render is too dark. Take the blur tool and just blur out the edges of the render a bit so it doesn't look like you just slapped it on there.
    -The choice of color isn't too bad.
    -You shouldn't put your name on the slide that says "Simplicity".

    I like the idea and you did a good job overall.

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    The whole thing just looks slapped together in about 5 minutes or so. The composition looks terrible, the whole concept is abit lame. You should spend time refining your sigs.

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