I need some comments on this work

[Lokiwho]

pretty much my first signature using renders and some brushes that i downloaded... :blink:

[Mr Toasty]

its alright for a first try, but it could be a lot better.

Renders - 99% of the time, one is enough. All the small renders clutter the sig, and make it look jumbled. Id say choose one of them (sniper ^_^) and make it bigger.

Background - Brushing is fine, could use some more diversity (different brushes), but like i said, alright for a first try

Text - doesnt go at all. Most sigs are botched by the text. Its usually hard to pick out a text according to render/style of the sig. For this, I would use a blockier, or camo-esque sig. Also, fit it with a nice color, the silver metal doesnt go at all.

Border - Ive said it once Ill say it again :Alright for a first try. The border isnt too bad, but if it was solid, it would be pretty nice. Also, you could try to take it out and just add a simple 1 px black border. (if you want to know how to make one, PM me )

Overall - Alright for a first try (how many times am i gonna say that? :lol Anyway, keep at it, check out some tuts, and PM me if you want some tips. Seeya around! ^_^

[Dutch-Soldier(nl)]

not bad for the first try...i think he's nice!!
But one render is enough

Good Luck


Greetz


Dutch-Soldier(nl)