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    HEre is my latest piece.. i dont know you guys tell me. C+c

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    I like it.. it does need a bit of work though.

    The render(s) aren't blended very well. I do, however, like the sword under the text.

    Great job, just blend in that render!

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    Not bad. I like the bg for sure. The render is hard to make out and a little blurry so maybe change that. Also, of you want to stroke the text, maybe make it smaller like 1-2 pixels. Good work! I know you're improving, so don't give up.

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    id blend the render and like twan said stroke the text to 1 -2 pixels ne thing bigger doesnt look right..nj ur improving!




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    I think the render on the right should be a bit bigger, and like everyone said, make the stroke smaller on the text. Nice work, I dig the background and the font.

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    The bgs good, the renders a bit small, the sword under the font was a good idea but I think it should be blended in some areas.

    I've seen some of your work, though this is the first I've commented on, only one font have I liked on all of your sigs and that's the top on of your current sig :mellow:

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    Thanks everyone for your C+C.
    1. the render is blended its just the light i added makes it look like that and also blurrs it a bit.
    2. i would have never thought u ppl liked the sword but i did it anyways.
    3. Thanks for the comments on the b.g i like it but its not my best.

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    the shield is a bit bright

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    ehh i think its alright but it couldve been better.

    Renders too small, under-blended, sorta monotone, shields pretty bright, and IMO the sword under the text doesnt look good. Background looks like you didnt even try, the text would probably look better with a 1 px black, and the render goes over the border.

    Just some things i noticed :P

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    nice brushing
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