home

[PlatinumKittyKat]

If home is where the heart is.
and the heart is where ur love is.
where is the heart in my home?
Cant feel it or hear it beating
thats why i decided that im leaving
hook up the life support ...but it just kept beeping
My home has flatlined. no resuscitation this time.
But its fine, cuz i know in time
that it'll appreciate and miss me
and i'll miss it.
hug and kiss me when i visit
cry cuz the babies grown
and they're sorry that they missed it.

[HooverBag]

How do you come up with this stuff? :blink: Good job though :P

[PlatinumKittyKat]

I have a crazy life... I just write about what I know.

[Samuel]

Pretty nice. The form is little strange, but not bad =)

[PlatinumKittyKat]

most poems i write go along with the song i was listening to when i was writing. it works for me LoL.