Jeff Francoeur

[Kakod]

made this for my friend...

[HooverBag]

I dont really like this one, the flare doesnt really fit in, and it obscures the renders

[randyrandy]

Flare not good, the Green cursive A on the left isn't good, render is hard to see.

[weasel]

First, I agree with the rest, screw the flare. Second, it is too small. Third, I do not like the text. Fourth, I do not like the render, or the fact that you can only see half of it. Fifth, the red and blue do not mix well in the background. Sorry man.

[Kakod]

alright....thanks?...

[Platnum]

Originally posted by randyrandy@8 Hours Ago
Flare not good, the Green cursive A on the left isn't good, render is hard to see.

The A needs to stay. He played for the braves, although its color needs to be changed.

The flare just obstructs everything, I think that should be your first change.