Experimenting...

[Kakod]

Tell me which one looks best...

[weasel]

The second. But, add a border to it. It would be the third, but the third is too dark. And the inside border is too far in.

[TheLegendaryOne]

Take the second one and add the border you put on the third one lol.

[Kakod]

TheLegendaryOne, I took your advice on the first one, but I kinda just tinkered with the second one a little. CnC please...

[Morphius]

I dont like the "different clouds" that are above the render. I want it to be cleaner. But still kind of good job.
Maby some sort of scanlines would do it better?

[Freak]

It's WAY too cloudy. Try something original...

[Kakod]

Those thats not the cloud filter... its a cloudy brush that i made... and i guess ill try some scanlines, but im at school right now, i'll try it when i get home. thanks for the CnC

[Adam]

I like your second recent one, just lose the clouds.

[AcidGlow]

Second is better but the render has too much stuff over it..hmm

[Dutch-Soldier(nl)]

I dont like the 'cloud effect' , but not bad..