The font is too small / too dark. Make it a little bigger, change the color to a brighter blue, like the brushing down by her left arm.
I don't know what the weird sideways candy cane thing by her head is, but imo that could be removed. Tech / Pixel brushes need to be used with care, that is if you used one.
The black void thing isn't really working for me, it looks like it needs something to be there. Maybe you could do a darker colored abstract background and put the brushing layer on the sig now to overlay. I don't know, just throwing out some ideas.
Overall, good work, but I think it could be better. Keep at it! :mellow:
Originally posted by Freak@14 Hours Ago The brushing works really well, but why did you stop?* The top parts want to be brushed too...lol* Nice aork.
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Because it's another style i've seen used. It's alright but the render needs a tad blending and I think diff tech lines would've been better.
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