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[xane]

Here it is.

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Better?

[Killer]

Ehh, Sorry man not your best. The background is very choppy and the render is very difficult too see. Try messing around with lighting, try adding another brush layer to bring more depth and detail too that render.

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I just realized your text, very difficult too see.

[xane]

yeah i gotta play

[Hybrid]

Pretty sweet actually, IMO. The render is too dark and there isn't enough goin g on and the text is hard to read.