Elin Grindemyr

[HooverBag]

Please C&C this one, theres something not right about it, but i can't quite put my finger on it. Any suggestions?

[Elleray]

why-the-hell-did-you-blend-her-body-like-that-!-?-!-?
ok, sigwithpersonasrenderinthem101 to blend them nicely, just dup the render layer, gaussian blur 5 pix, puts it under the original render layer, dont erase her poor, beautiful body, also with the text, use an AA or strong, or soft, not none, cuz then the text looks all pixely, and not nice

[HooverBag]

aaah ok i get ya, well i'll try and update that and fix it, thanx 4 the tips

[Elleray]

np

[HooverBag]

What about this one, is this better, and what still needs improving?

[Elleray]

its better, but the background make it look liek shes not really laying anywhere, text looks 10x better, but try putting that line to soft light, and duplicating it once. and try moving the hooverbag text to the bottom right, where the white will show up better.

[HooverBag]

wat about this?

[Spikee]

tbh sigs with models in dont really go well unless the bg is simple, not like ab or grunge cos they just dont looks right, but this one is getting better, keep on with it

[HooverBag]

I think i might just revamp the whole thing by makin a new background

[Freak]

Probably a good idea...the bg kills the sig. Everything else looks good though. Keep it up!