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Thread: my 3rd try

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    edited:

    another try:

    here's a new one:

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    It's a good try.

    A few things:
    1. A bit too bright.
    2. The text needs to be changed.
    3. The brushing is ok, but the pixel strech seems to be overlayed on top of the brushing.

    Pretty good for your 3rd try. Keep on trying. You'll get better.

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    lookin good tho it does seem to look a lil faded maybe adjust the contrast a lil bit and ull have a winner

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    thanks guys!

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    not too keen, the second would look ace if you removed those squares but other than that i can't say much on the other except i don't like 'em
    deaz\dxloa\dxedr



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    they are pretty good - love the 1st ones colors and the 3rd ones text

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    i really like the text, i must admit. but maybe add some more contrast, it is to light and almost 'dull'

    duplicate your bg, then mess with the blending modes and what not. give ita shot, i think it may help.

    but, it is still a good sig, great job.

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    second (if the boxes were gone) and last one for me m8, very nice

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    Tone down the grid on the second one and that would be my favorite. Nice job man.

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    thanks hxck! how bout the 4th?

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