SOTW Entry

[KlngMe]

Eh not really good, but it's something...

[vin]

kind of boring, maybe add some falling feathers ? (not animated)

[CrazyGamer]

OMG I haven't seen your stuff in so long. Its a good start but it needs to be worked on. Feathers would look good but i don't know. Not worthy of currenting imo. But it does look ok. Keep up the good work mano.

-CG

[KlngMe]

Alright I took your advice and added some feathers, what do you think?

Yellow Feathers



White Feathers

[AntidotexXx]

I dont really like it too much man, the colors and the render kinda scream for help... try some opaque colors and remove the feathers because they look like a bird was murdered right above the sig.
IM pretty sure u can do better.
Nt

[KlngMe]

Haha man thats pretty funny

Yea I'll work on it some more when I get home

[vin]

make the feathers horizonally layed out like their floating down for a more emotional feel.
and make them smaller and not on the render.


it would look alot smoother

[Shamino]

If you put the feathers under the color balance layers, and make them a tad bit smaller...

[KlngMe]

Well I Worked on it again, changed the colors and re-did the feathers

[Freak]

The background is too cloudy, and like Antidote said, the colors need work. Also, try using just a default font.