Song sketch

[MartinBabies]

Haha, you didn't know Rabieshund wrote music too, eh? :P

Read first.
Started out as song I was about to write so that we could play it in school, but not we have decided to start a band, so I guess you could say that this is our first song.
Please note that this is just a sketch. This is not how the song will sound like when it's finished. First of all, the two last verses aren't finished yet, so I have just copied the first verse two the other ones just to fill out.
The vocals will NOT be sung by me, like in this sketch. We have an extremely talented girl on the lead vocals. I will do the other vocals though.

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This song sketch was made in Cubase SX 2.02 with VST-plugins as Drumkit From Hell 2 (drums, duh), Amplitude (for guitar sounds) and Trilogy (for the bass). A normal dynamic microphone was used for the vocals and my Epiphone SG something for guitars.

Lyrics and music written and produced by me.


Lyrics (so far, title not made up yet)

Thick skin covers vurnable parts
As my back is leaned against my pillow
Still growing
Strong arms pointing at the sky
As my protection from the sun
I can see your head in the reflection
Of the water you'll be drinking
With your feet far beneath mine own
You're so thirsty in this early hour

I know, I know, I know, I know, I know
I know it's true
That you'll be here forever
Don't go, don't go, don't go, don't go, don't go
Don't leave me here
Alone, without your calming (voice)


Yes, the song is kinda written in a naiv way, it's written like that on purpose. ^^
Sorry if I pronounce some words in an odd way in the song. :P I'm also sorry that my voice isn't the best. Luckily, I won't be singing this song live in school later.

Please comment!

[Samuel]

Lol xD

The vocals kill me. I think the other vocals will be better. Music is amazing! Vocals are good, just not the best quality.

Good lyrics. Can't wait to hear the real version.

[MartinBabies]

Thank you for commenting.

Only one comment? Hey, I have MUSIC here, not just unfinished lyrics. xP

[Samuel]

Ah, no one looks at this section but me. = /

[Afterburn]

Music's cool.. lyrics are kind of etchy, but hey they're unfinished.
Pretty good for the time being I guess.