Industrial...need help

[Ben]

I think this is a great idea, but im not sure how i can make this look good, here are the basics but please help me improve it




It is suposed to be some industrial warnging thingymebob, the yellow things top and bottom WERE warning plates, they are fucked and old, hence why there are rotting etc. I still dont like the text >.<

[katgirl21]

i dont like the yellow color in the bg

try using a green like the jewel/button thing in center

[Ben]

If you mean the things at the top + bottom thats yellow for warning >.<

[Ben]

Version 2 :



C+C please

[SgtSwabs]

Oooh I like it I especially like the glass panel, I dont know wether its supposed to look convex but it does, which is cool&#33; And I like the way you have given the warning signs a rough look. The one problem is that each panel of the warning sign seems to bulge in the middle, I dont know if its supposed to do this...in fact I dont even know if its supposed to be a warning sign lol :P But if it IS a warning sign then surely it would be flat.

[Ben]

You mean the text or the yellow warning things?

They are suposed to be flat yes, but its an industrial look, so they are old and worn out therefore they are fucked :lol:

V2.5 with the glasses rounded more and bit more detail

[keden]

The orb thing whas better Ben...

[Ben]

Yeah it looked nice but it really didn&#39;t fit in, ive got another piece coming that involves that orb, do not worry Kedan my male Sister :lol:

[DevilWithIn]

Its Cool Nice Work Ben But The Txt IS A Wee Bit &#39;ard To Read

[Ben]

Why its gone now