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[Dennu]

http://www.deviantart.com/deviation/29625314/
edit: yes master dale, please, do not hit me with the bamboo stik

comments?

[Dale]

Gaha I.E Sucks. Can you post a link instead of posting the image.

[Dennu]

*resurrection*
I really need comments, I think im getting a bit better :wink:

[ZeroX]

it looks pretty good... i think that with a dark background it would look sweet... but im a noob... dont listen to me...

[XiQu]

Sweet.. It would make a good wallpaper. and yeah I agree with zero, would look good with a dark background.

[SgtSwabs]

I think it would look like ass with a dark background because all the lighting would stand out too much, its cool as it is now but it seems a bit cluttered.

[Dale]

hmm, looking ok, but there seems to be a 'kink' in the centre where the blast / brushing is radiating from.
Try some simple multicolouring ((blue / green / yellow )) And possibly more then just abstract brushes. Maybe work onto a render, or just a little more then brushing.

A little too heavily colour balanced / hue-saturationed also