Punishment

[Heavens-Exile]

I really like this one, but at the same time I dont...



...It might be that it is hard to see when the bg ends and the render starts. I dont know. C&C please and thank you.

FYI: Link to Render

[Tyson]

I think the render is hard to see against that background, text is a bit bright too. If you hadn't given the link to the render i wouldn't have had a clue what that was lol.
Now that i can see where the render is its not so bad but you should maybe make it stand out a bit more.

[Heavens-Exile]

Hows about this?

[Fort_of_Shadows]

Hey man i like it but like this guy said he is hard to see. I think if you darkened the brushing in the background it would look nasty.

[Heavens-Exile]

any new comments?

[Tyson]

Text is a bit better and the renders still quite hard to see but looks alot better, good job.