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    I think the colors on the upper half is really disturbing. I would actually make everything except the apple on that half black and white.

    May I ask.. what the hell is this? :P Is it just some artistic randomness or is there some kind of meaning behind it?

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    its for my marketing class.
    had to make a logo and a brand name.

    the project was designer clothing company.

    and.

    the middle picture is just like. random.
    all was from stocks and photoshop though.

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    Pleaseeee tell me that's a font that you used! If so, what is it?

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    I thin it's called subway, or jungle. All i'd say about this is work on the colours, they don't seem to fit =S On the trees... somebrighter stuff would be good, and the quality of the image on the left doesn't look too good.

    I like the apple ^_^


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    I agree, that image could look a little more clearer :P The Lions look like a blob XD
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    a little crazy and for marketing i don't see it as working, what audience were you trying to reach with this? i mean i have some idea of what but enlighten me? i like the top and the bottom.. just not too much together but if i had a better understanding i'm sure i could give better comments.. just the audience which i think i need to know and it's all good.. plus nice logo too
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    i usually dont try and critique your work, because you always tell me that things are that way because you meant them to be that way. however this time your supposed to follow the conventions of design... and i dont think you did that very well at all. there is no flow, no line to draw the eye from one area to another. the colours are just random, and dont do anything to bring the eye around the image. the repitition is good, but it doesnt do anything usefull, just cuts the whole image in half.

    but the logo its self is sick, try and do something more to bring the logo out... because now its just getting lost in a mess of colours, images and shapes... but i know you wont because you do what you think is right regardless.


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    the building in the top looks like the mayan temple things i saw in mexico
    i really like this work

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    undertone-> yeah i see were your coming from with all of that.
    the logo itself was just what i handed in for marketing. not the whole picture/ random mess of images and colours.

    OpticoN-> that is a Mayan temple. I am very interested in both Mayan culture and a lot of the mysteries that surrounds it.

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