What should I fix?

[PREDATOR.]

I fixed it a little so scroll down and see the fixed ones... The old one is here

do you like it? Something is a little off to me. What should I fix?

[snap]

dude.
its good, but monotoned. try not to bump your thread three times in three hours; people will get to you

[Tyson]

Backgrounds nice, i like the squares. But the render doesn't go well with it.

[Eidur]

The background is pretty sweet but try to make the render blend with it...
personnaly i think the font doesnt really matches with the picture but that's just my opinion

[Ragidy_man]

nice style but blend the render a little and lower the opacity of the scan lines a littel

[Freak]

The stock is overcontrasted and blurry. It's not blended, the background( colors too) don't fit the stock. The text needs work and I'd suggest check ing out some tutorials man. =) Just trying to help.

[PREDATOR.]

Yeah, I fixed it and posted it again... But someone seemed to have DELETED that post... -_-


There is a fixed version...



I also re-made it:


:unsure: How are they?

[Adam]

Yeah that was my bad :P Your sig didnt load for me period in that post earlier, so all i saw was "i changed the font blah blah". try using imageshack.us b/c your first one took forever to load for me just now.

Anywany not bad! Much better than your current. In the first fixed version take the white glow off the text and i cant really see much else wrong. Maybe set text to overlay. In the 2nd lower the opacity on the motion blur and the render could be blended better.