better?

[Blackberry]

i think this one is better than other its my 3rd

[Virulent]

the render is too pixelated. other than that its nice.

[Lord_badass]

backround its too smple and there is too much unused space

[Blackberry]

the white spot? its the sytle :/

[Virtue]

Some people, like me, enjoy simplicity. That's why my only recommendation is that you blend the edges of your render into the background a little better. I do this by zooming in about twice on one of the edges, getting out the lasso tool, closely tracing the outer edge, and then clicking blur or blur more. Go around the entire render like this and it should look more fluid. Note: I usually only use blur more on pieces of clothing, not skin or weapons.

[OpticoN]

simplicity in some points can be good.

but in this it is just to simple that it is just some brushes and a render with some simple text.

i think you just need to work on the background and the blending of the render, make them pop out more rather than just feel flat.