New Sig, First C4D

[Adam]

First in months and made for a guy at another forum. I dont really like using C4D at all but i had to please teh noob. 2 versions, what you guys think?

[shajn]

I would want more saturated colors, and you should work more on the text.

Sorry for not giving a better answer.. I'm tired, just woke up.

[Magic]

i dont like the render