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  1. #1
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    Default new, for me anyway

    never done something quite like this, first try at the style.


    If everyone cared and nobody cried...
    If everyone loved and nobody lied...
    If everyone shared and swallowed their pride...
    Then we'd see the day that nobody died...
    noobdesign.net ftw

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    wow, this one really throws me a loop. at first, to be honest, i though it was poorly done (filtered to death, thrown together really fast), but then i took another look at it. heres my 2 cents:

    i really like the scan lines, but maybe make them lighter when over your render.

    lighten up the text, i couldnt see it for forever.

    but besides that, i love it. its something that takes a little while to sink in. others may disagree [and i can see why], but i think that this makes for a great sig. 9.45/10

  3. #3
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    I completely agree, it is a great design.

    Yet the scanlines do need to be lowered/lightened, and lighten the text, its barely readable atm, but very nice work man. 9.25/10

  4. #4
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    Looks good, I really like the render and the colors chosen.

    The brushing around the front of her face makes it seem like she's smoking <_<.

    Also the brushing to the left and right look repetitive.

    The font does need to stand out a bit more but I also think it needs something to make it fit better.

  5. #5
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    make it a bit brighter and remove the scan lines from her body, are there brushes in it? or only distort ? The text needs to be replaced I think.
    the BG looks nice but I dont like the scan lines.
    gj

  6. #6
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    nope, no brushes no c4d no anything... all defaults. and yeah, the scanlines seem to stand out more 'after' I hosted it >_<

    If everyone cared and nobody cried...
    If everyone loved and nobody lied...
    If everyone shared and swallowed their pride...
    Then we'd see the day that nobody died...
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  7. #7
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    Probably since this is an almost white forum :P.

    Even if it's default brushes, the sides are just a bit repetitive. Other than that though I really like it.

    I think this is the first time I've seen you reply to one of your posts :P.

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