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    Default abstract spider


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    I don't like the filter render clouds background, but with some more work it could make a nice wallpaper. And i'm all for a symmetrical shape, i just don't think it looks good centred


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    I'm not too keen on the linear dodge effects, neither am I keen on the filters used such as render clouds or wind but I must say its quite a nice picture. Good use of symetry to create the effect but it could use some fine tuning. Good pic lots of potential.

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    Quote Originally Posted by catalyst View Post
    I'm not too keen on the linear dodge effects, neither am I keen on the filters used such as render clouds or wind but I must say its quite a nice picture. Good use of symetry to create the effect but it could use some fine tuning. Good pic lots of potential.
    Also some of the zoom blur is very noticeable.
    Very cool though.

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    It's ok. I have some critique. I like the main idea, and although I hate filters, your use of the wind filter turned out nice. However, there are many weak elements here. To save us both time I'll simply make a list.

    1. The typo - sorry but i've seen this before and I abhor it, sorry dude but might wanna think of individual typo for each piece or a new "logo"

    2. The border - these are overrated and often unneeded. I suggest trying a simple 1px black border.

    3. The background - already been mentioned

    4. The zoom blur - again, already mentioned, but I really don't like it, I think it stands out too much and is overall superfluous to the design.

    5. A little oversaturated, but that's just me being nit picky.


    Overall, decent job,

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    I agree with above. Adjust the saturation a bit, a 1px border or a cinema border if you're going for a wallpaper, and a new bg. Other than that, I love it. gj! =)


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    How do u make those kind of abstracts? What do u use?

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