First attempts at animation

[Xelis]

This was my very first one:


This one i decided to go all out in animation:

[jerner]

I quite like some of the first one. the character-render looks like it fits, but it seems to be too mutch black in the bg, I think there could be a more fitting font, but the animations is OK, simple, but ok. the pattern also looks rather cool. Good one for your first.

The second one I like too, but still, :\ I think the render looks cool and the techbrushes too, though the animation looks rather overwelming. Too mutch going on. And that fon't doesn't fit, looks like harry potter. add a border, maybe just a 1px.

But I think the animations is good on both, since it's your first ones, don't animate too much at once. gj keep it up

[Illegalx17]

pretty good, one question, how did you make the line animation? like the heart monitor line on the second one? thats nice.

[AcidGlow]

Cool, might wanna work on your background work first. And your second sig has animations playig too fast I think.