Everlast Signature #4

[Everlast]

This Is My Fourth Signature. Hope You Like It



Please Crit =D

[Outsider]

1) I don't like popouts.
2) I don't like the colours.
3) Text = *shudder* Sorry. Doesn't really go with the signature.
4) Too bright on the left side.
5) Where did the yellow come from?
NOTE: This is all in my opinion, and.. I'm not that good of an artist.

[neogfx]

OK, it is too dark, way too dark, you need some light in there. The render is really hard to make out, I still can't figure it out now.
IMO if you make a popout sig you need a render that is whole and pop it out top and bottom, they just look odd when it only comes out one side of the sig. I actually like the text, but think it needs a different font, I would suggest soething like Tahoma.
Having said all that, for a fourth sig it is very good, and it's great that you're not worried about trying newer, more difficult things like popouts. Keep it up.