something simple

[mannos]

something simple i made. thoughts?


Ok, i neeed to change the size. but appart from that?

[Alan "The Wrench"]

i like what you are going for. i do think, however, that the "contact" is off angle from the eye. its like the woman is looking slightly to the right but the contact is facing strait forward. know what i mean. i think if you transform with a little distortion it would be a lot better. if you had put this together earlier, you probably could have entered it into SOTW sci-fi. nice.

[sunshiine]

cool idea, it looks good.. do it with the both eyes and add some effects on her skin, can become a nice sig^^ gj

[mannos]

cheers guys
i'll have a quick fiddle with it now

[mannos]

hmm... the original model image was on a bit of a tilt, so its quite hard to get this right... thoughts?

[Etitan]

I think the metal iris and pupil should be proportionate to the real one, know what I mean?....

[Shadow]

Yea they should be the same size. Also, for some reason the face kinda looks funny to me, I think it's that the metal eye isn't still lined up yet or something, idk.

[Apathy]

It's a nice concept, just needs a little work.

[mannos]

i did make it a bit smaller than the original iris. maybe thats throwing me off...
k, i'll hae another go

[mannos]

i cant seem to get the red to glow realistically. any thoughts?