Trying to get out of monotone phase rate my latest please?=)

[Wolf]

Im working with a very good senior member on this site and hes teaching me to step out of the monotone period.I know this isnt that good but its a start.CnC please guys?

[RoughDraft]

alot better.. suggest diff brushes.. i dunno the scratchy brushes just dont do it for me anymore.. and text needs some work.. but other than that the color has been a big upgrade.. nice work

[Wolf]

thanks heaps that mean a lot to me l appreciate it

[kemo]

heaps better than that other one. and i like the bg. GJ

[Wolf]

Thanks Kemo l appreciate it

[Alan "The Wrench"]

thanks heaps that mean a lot to me l appreciate it

heaps better than that other one. and i like the bg. GJ

Thanks Kemo l appreciate it

you guys remind me of brothers

[iwz_]

I like it but yer... Text needs work

[Notorious]

you guys remind me of brothers

Lol yeah, me too. They have similar avatars too.
I think its ok, IMO i think their is a little too much space. If their is not min/max on size that your working with, id try to either use the space or shorten the canvas.And the text is alittle hard to see.

[Douchebag23]

i dunno sumthin about the background i dont like and maybe change the text other than that gj

[Wolf]

lol guys me and Kemo arent brothers but we are really close friends in real life and nearly everything we like is similar.Also thanks for everyone that left feedback