newest sig. feedback appreciated

[kemo]

i made this for a battle, though i made it in around 15 min. i like the bg and the text. not my best. but i like it.

[Papa]

Its pretty god kemo. Nice bg. But i would only use 1 render cause with 2 u have 2 focal points and u only want one focal point. Another thing is stick with basic windows fonts till u get used to text i do that makes sigs loko alot nicer. i would also dull the scan lines down a bit. sides that looks great. And the bg goes great with teh guy from half life so good job.

[Dark Method]

The bg doesn't go with either of the renders at all I don't think. And as said, stick with only one render in a sig, unless you're going to duplicate the same render and smudge it or something. You don't need two focal points in an image of this size.

[Riddleb0x]

ok this will prolly not go over well but here goes. I like the idea but instead of both being in the scan line make just one in there and the other like he is standing in front of a TV or large monitor. One looks in game the other looks RL. That make sense? I use multiple renders in sigs some times and the ywork out good for the most part when done right. The only thing I dislike really is both are in the same element. Pick one and move it out of the element and it s a winner

[kemo]

thanks for the feedback. i'll try it next time with one focal point.