New Signature

[Darkstar2k7]

Hi there
I just wanted to post this and get some feedback because it's my first piece using the C4D and more advanced aspect (if thats what you call it) of graphics. I am pretty pleased with how it turned out for a first try but any tips or comments are appreciated.
Thanks

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[~>MF29<~]

It looks like you set an apply image layer to blur and set it to lighting, the background is a little bit too blurry as appose to the render.

[Papa]

blend the render a bit more too. it just seems very choppy on teh edges of her.