CS sigs..which is better?

[Haven]

I made these two for me and a friend...which one is better..


this one I made for a friend...


This one I made for meself..

which is better? please rate and comment..thanks..

[-Kanji-]

k, well i'll try an help on YOUR sig since both of the sigs can improve on similiar things. with your sig it has nice brushing and a nice color scheme. The render is blended almost to perfection. however the line that u put there should go behind the render i think. I'd brush out the part of that bar so it looks like it goes behind him. The text looks good, i'd just blend that in also. Lol another thing i'd add is maybe a 1px black stroke border. just to liven up the edges i guess. I dunno only suggestions. Then with ur friends, I'd blend the text a bit, and i think the render should be alot bigger for that size of a sig. trying to help out. nice work though :lol:

friends- 6.5/10

urs- 7.5/10