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    I've sorta been in a rut lately where I can't make anything I really like, and I've been in photoshop a lot just messing around seeing if I can get myself out of that. I came up with this and I kind of like it.

    v1


    v2


    v3. I thought I'd do another version. Is this any better?
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    Oh wow, so much you could improve on but so much you got right:

    v1: background = great, stock = overly contrasted and brightened, text = the green is really out of place, take a colour from the stock and move it around a bit

    v2: ok, the background just looks rubbish tbh, i get the feeling you only did that so the text would stand out more?
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    ^ agreed exactly, plus that duplicate on the right is pointless. doesn't work for this

    v1 for sure, but v2 has more potential.

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    Hmmm
    I made some changes to both...


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    Did another version.


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    Why was my topic moved to Signature Tutorials?

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    i think the green text rocked. v3 is ok, but the blur and the scanlines are obsolete.
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    yeah, why was it moved?
    I'm not sure whioch version I like most, but v1 and v2 seem most appealing
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