Batman c4d

[Pwny]

What Can I do to make this better?

[s0ggywaffls]

i think the text is too sharp

at first glance it just looks like a c4d slapped on a black bg, but i guess its just overlapping

[Henry]

Put more into it, right now it seems like a batman render, underneath a C4D render. It needs a background, and some other effects. Also, i think it would look better if you didnt have quite so much of the c4d render on top of the batman one, it makes it hard to find him/the focal point.
Keep working at it, read some tutorials.

[LoganGFX]

I love how the c4d wraps around Bats on the left(his right) side, but I think it covers him too much on his face and right(his left) side. Also, the light blue line(I guess an outline on Bats side; our left, his right), should go away. And the text is a tad sharp, also maybe use the color from the sig, instead of white.

[Virtue]

Henry's right, you just need a real subtle, real dark background and some erasing here and there to make it much better.

[Adam]

Try to do something more with it and get rid of the plain white bg. It is a little too plain right now. Mess around with different ways of coloring instead of making it so monotone.

[cheeko24]

yeah i like the colors and the text, but there seems to be to much around batman head its hard to tell which is hi and the effect.