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Thread: Leaden Vain

  1. #1
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    Default Leaden Vain

    If I had the courage in me.
    I could stand above this world fearless.
    If I was not trapped within this damaged vessel.
    I would only see the light.

    How we spoke so very briefly
    in the way we came to meet
    Your energy went right through me
    The broken path two lovers seek
    While truth lies within my memory.
    My broken soul has been dismantled.

    Passion fuels my love.
    You lit my heart on fire.
    Pyrokinetic from above.
    White wings of angelic fashion.
    Here to hand off the leaden stone.

    It's too fucking heavy.

    ... Cry from the weight.
    Sigh... & Debate.


    Dragged down with this depression
    forced to slowly piece together
    this life's cryptic message.
    While leaden creeps in vain.
    I feel my body getting denser.
    Suffer & sorrow within my brain.
    Cells bring my muscles tenser.
    As I lose myself to forget this pain.

    The snakes around me whisper
    and quickly crawl up my spine.
    Slowly turn the awkward listener.
    To be Surprised by A destined find.


    Brightly burning key above me.
    Shines within this deep black hole.
    As our moon turns to face me.
    I look to see my faded soul.

    Light explodes from within me.
    All of heaven opens wide.
    Pupils dilate in amazement.
    Overwhelmed and synthesized.
    Molecules glow bright amber.
    DNA spirals to combine.
    The golden kiss of a goddess
    from her neon bright blue eyes.

    She lifts the stone up above me
    Shapes my leaden veins into gold.
    Reassures faith to purity.
    The key unlocks all truth told.
    Love is
    always,
    forever
    & infinity.
    Love is
    truth,
    passion
    & dignity.
    Last edited by Krimsyn; 06-18-2007 at 03:02 PM.

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    WOW gJ

    i came to kick some a$s rock the fuck!n house and kick some as$

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    Thats.. REALLY good. Like, exceptionally good.

    Trying to pinpoint a certain point that I like is hard, just the meaning is so simple yet so strongly portrayed.

    Thanks =] Feels silly saying thanks for something like this, but I enjoyed reading that lol

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    DAMN! That's awesome.


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    ^^HAHAHA, dm sucks XD


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    I read the whole thing, computed it, and I thought, "COOL!"

    Great write!

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